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The way you have written this piece is exquisite. The form of rhyme has been repetitive in pattern. It's words and needed amount of words are and have filled its purpose to express the purpose. All this very well needed to make a well-evaluated piece of literature. Not very memorable in the long run though, not catchy is what I mean. But the impact is there. The vision and purpose is well proposed in this piece. The technique fits into the pattern of the poem: original. Continue to write, share those thoughts; it's truly enlightening. To know there are deep pieces like this.
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